This was such a sweet short story. I read it straight through. There was no danger (except to the hearts involved), which was a refreshing for me. I really liked the main characters Heather and Lance. They fought themselves and the past to find love and happiness. My only problem with it is that it wasn't longer. There were no editing problems (that I noticed), the characters are well developed for the length and you just want to get to know more about them.